I would like to note that this is my first ever e session.... but here goes.
zachwsu Member  100 posts Joined Sep 2007 Location: San Francisco More info | May 09, 2008 20:07 | #1 I would like to note that this is my first ever e session.... but here goes. http://www.zachanderson.com
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madhatter04 Goldmember 1,930 posts Likes: 52 Joined Oct 2006 Location: Southern California More info | May 09, 2008 20:26 | #2 I love your use of natural light and you look like you had a great couple to work with! Designer // Art Director // Photographer
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May 09, 2008 20:30 | #3 thanks for the tip! ill have to pay more attention to that on my next shoot... http://www.zachanderson.com
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bnlearle Goldmember  1,901 posts Likes: 7 Joined Aug 2006 Location: San Diego More info | May 09, 2008 21:19 | #4 I'm totally cool with the composition you've got going here. I think they're great on their own but then I think they're even better considering it's your first e-shoot! The ring shot is freaking awesome, by the way. twitter
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sexyyoyi Member 138 posts Joined Feb 2008 More info | May 09, 2008 21:59 | #5 To me, I would like the 1st photo more if it was more sharp. But it has a good composition.
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mckc Senior Member 296 posts Likes: 1 Joined Mar 2005 Location: kansas city, ks More info | May 09, 2008 22:23 | #6 I really like the idea you had going with the ring shot! Very creative. I wouldn't worry about the composition in these. Your composition looks fine especially since you actually captured real moments with the couple. I also REALLY liked how you put the sun to their back and let it lighten up their hair. The see saw picture is great, but does seem as if it could use just a touch of a contrast bump. Sony A7S III, Sony 70-200 2.8, Sony 16-35 2.8
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May 09, 2008 23:04 | #7 the lighting was really nice that day, and yes i need to work on my sharpening skills havent quite figured that one out yet http://www.zachanderson.com
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Philco Senior Member  940 posts Likes: 4 Joined Nov 2005 Location: SandyEggo, CA. More info | May 09, 2008 23:12 | #8 I like the series too. Composition could be a little more careful, but that's a nitpick speaking as a photographer - your clients won't see them that way, I'm sure they love them. Color is great, clean processing. I agree about the saw picture- push up the black clipping or the contrast a bit - strong backlight can give you a bit of halation / haze, it's easy to fix. I'm loving the backlight - really well used. Canon 5D MKIII/Canon 5D MKII/ 70-200 F2.8 IS L / 24-70 F2.8L / 85 F1.2L II/ 35 f1.4L / 135 F2.0L / Canon 600 EX-RT X 2
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cchooks Senior Member 280 posts Joined Apr 2008 More info | May 10, 2008 13:01 | #9 In the first shot, the foreground to me is too distracting from the subject. There is a nice feel to the series, but I agree that sometimes there is too much info in the frame. I Have a Pair of 40Ds
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lma871 Member  170 posts Joined Sep 2007 Location: Utah More info | May 13, 2008 12:56 | #10 LOVE the ring shot...I acutally laughed like crazy when I saw it! It was awesome! ~Leisa
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