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May 10, 2008 19:15 |  #1

I'm lucky enough to live near a beautiful National Park and I'm trying to do it justice so any CC gladly received


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May 10, 2008 19:29 |  #2

Better, but aim more left, just omit the boats, I looking for more shale rock.


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May 10, 2008 20:44 |  #3

I like this one better, also. I also like the pier so I'm ok with the composition as is.


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May 10, 2008 21:11 as a reply to  @ photoguy6405's post |  #4

Both images posted place the horizon dead center. In this one I'd like to see some of those trees cut off to place the horizon closer to the top third. Then work the PP to make the most of that fog and reflections.


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May 10, 2008 21:34 |  #5

After looking at it again after your comments, I agree that the 'extra' trees don't really add anything and could easily be done away with.


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