not something that I normally shoot . . . looking for some feedback. what could I do better next time?
ryan
RAPhotography Senior Member 465 posts Likes: 10 Joined Jan 2008 Location: US More info | May 16, 2008 21:00 | #1 |
DrFil Senior Member 513 posts Joined May 2008 Location: Los Angeles More info | May 17, 2008 17:11 | #2 I like the perspective, but it looks like it's lacking contrast in the bright white of the flower.
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May 17, 2008 19:01 | #3 DrFil wrote in post #5544140 I like the perspective, but it looks like it's lacking contrast in the bright white of the flower. probably my PP. I tried to make the flower pop a bit and probably made it a bit too bright. I notice that there are some hot spots in the white and I can certainly fix this.
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kirkt Cream of the Crop More info | May 18, 2008 21:48 | #4 it also looks like you have some fringing on the high-contrast edges of the white flower and the darker green leaf background (especially down the right edge of the right flower - looks cyan on my monitor). Kirk
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GlennNK Goldmember 4,630 posts Likes: 3 Joined Oct 2006 Location: Victoria, BC More info | May 19, 2008 23:42 | #5 RAPhotography wrote in post #5540128 not something that I normally shoot . . . looking for some feedback. what could I do better next time? ryan Get rid of everything but the flower; the background (and foreground) is so busy, it draws attention from the beautiful flower. When did voluptuous become voluminous?
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