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May 16, 2008 21:00 |  #1

not something that I normally shoot . . . looking for some feedback. what could I do better next time?

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May 17, 2008 17:11 |  #2

I like the perspective, but it looks like it's lacking contrast in the bright white of the flower.




  
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May 17, 2008 19:01 |  #3

DrFil wrote in post #5544140 (external link)
I like the perspective, but it looks like it's lacking contrast in the bright white of the flower.

probably my PP. I tried to make the flower pop a bit and probably made it a bit too bright. I notice that there are some hot spots in the white and I can certainly fix this.

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May 18, 2008 21:48 |  #4

it also looks like you have some fringing on the high-contrast edges of the white flower and the darker green leaf background (especially down the right edge of the right flower - looks cyan on my monitor).


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May 19, 2008 23:42 |  #5

RAPhotography wrote in post #5540128 (external link)
not something that I normally shoot . . . looking for some feedback. what could I do better next time?

ryan

Get rid of everything but the flower; the background (and foreground) is so busy, it draws attention from the beautiful flower.

First be warned that flower photography can be addictive and it's really damn difficult. I've been working on it almost exclusively for over one year, and I'm still grasping.

You may have to register, but to see some really great flower photography, to here (and select Forums/Flora and Macro):

http://www.naturescape​s.net …1e17ea8a25f9782​b91b4cc1c8 (external link)

It's where I go for tips and inspiration.


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