overdone or not?

Just learned a few new techniques and was trying to apply them. Not 100% best effort, i just needed to try it out before going to sleep.

would it help if i did a before and after? (just slight skin retouching)

wow this picture looses a LOT of color when transfered to jpg.....what can i do to fix that? i mean everything was much more vibrant in PS and everything looks so dull here...
EDITED updated with profile change

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YES, she looks way too plastic!!

The image was created and saved with an Adobe rgb profile. Most browsers are not able to display Adobe RGB.

Resave the image with a sRGB profile will restore the image to the way you desire.

I personally don't like the skin texture and the crop is not flattering at all.

Overdone and overcooked!!

i don't really know if it's that overdone. i'd like to see the original.

heres original (i basically just wanted to remove the blemishes from her face)

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