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May 20, 2008 07:21 |  #1

what do you think of the pic in terms of composition, processing, what do you think i should have done. comments and critique welcomed. Thanks.


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May 20, 2008 12:39 |  #2

the foreground looks very drab/boring while the background looks stunning. what is that, a folded up tent?




  
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May 20, 2008 12:44 |  #3

dervish wrote in post #5559717 (external link)
what do you think i should have done.

I think you should have walked forward about a hundred feet, left the shot in landscape orientation, and captured a nice skyline.

The foreground in this shot is hurting it. That ball of something is very distracting, the yard scraps all over the lawn is messy, and I'm not a fan of the clipped tree on the left.

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May 20, 2008 13:39 |  #4

Composition: not very attractive. It is too wide. There is many things. My eyes just dont grab any thing until I have locked into every thing....

Try to have a subject to non subjects in your picture. It will be nice.
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