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May 27, 2008 22:15 |  #1

is this shot any good? i think there something missing but no sure what it is.

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May 28, 2008 11:17 |  #2

It's not that there's anything missing for me, but as soon as I opened the image I had to refresh my page to make sure it didn't load wrong. You have some kind of artifact in the center of the image that looks like a stutter. Was this image stitched together or do the layers not line up?


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May 28, 2008 11:27 |  #3

Try cropping some of the sky out. This will make it follow the rule of thirds. (Generally, you want the horizon on the imaginary 1/3 or 2/3 mark.)


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May 28, 2008 11:34 |  #4

LeuceDeuce wrote in post #5611557 (external link)
It's not that there's anything missing for me, but as soon as I opened the image I had to refresh my page to make sure it didn't load wrong. You have some kind of artifact in the center of the image that looks like a stutter. Was this image stitched together or do the layers not line up?

I saw that blur LD.thought maybe it was done retouching?

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Try cropping some of the sky out. This will make it follow the rule of thirds. (Generally, you want the horizon on the imaginary 1/3 or 2/3 mark.)

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May 28, 2008 12:15 |  #5

Flo wrote in post #5611657 (external link)
I saw that blur LD.thought maybe it was done retouching?

It very well could be. That's why I suggested the mismatched layers. Perhaps a different treatment was applied to the lawn, and then the layer was accidentally shifted without noticing it. It happens to the rest of us :)


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