A couple of re-edits, C/C please

Re-edited these to see what I can get from these. The C/C I got from my other set of these were that they had a yellow tint to them. I have since stepped up from my laptop to a 22" Flat screen desktop . Tell me what you think of these.

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First one is precious.I lean toward B&W for this.I do sense a yellowish cast to the photo?

Second one, a tighter crop off centered maybe?

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I really like the B&W edit...

yes like both edits! great shot with the bubbles!

Really like both shots, as is. Congratulations!
It's hard to find anything negative to comment on. However, I would have to say that the lighting in the second shot is not optimum for the little girl. It's too flat. Perhaps there is too much fill light, but she needs some facial shadows to give her face some facial contours and depth.

If you really want constructive criticism, this is the right place, and there are lots of people here who can give out very detailed suggestions.

I like the B&W edit, nice work great photo either way

Thanks everyone. I really like the B/W edit myself. I was thinking about doing that but I just loved the colors of the bubbles and didnt want to do a selective color on them.