Personally, IMHO the photograph needs more detail to keep my interest as its complete white and black. I don't care about rules, just what looks good and in the end any photo's success is in the eyes of the viewer.
As we see, those opinions are quite mixed.
And as to the title, To make this a panorama detail would have helped. It looks more like a B&W negative that was cropped to the current dimensions.
My definition would classify this as art, not a panoramic photograph.





