too much space overhead?

We took this outside the cheerleading gym, she wanted a quick headshot to send out with senior thank you cards. I am trying to improve so any feed back would be great.

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I like it a lot, but u know whats wrong with it.. a crop like this would have worked much better I think:

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only, one comment? any other feedback?

i like the crop done by martin. great picture nonetheless

yes. Too much space overhead unless the space was for text or some other utilitarian purpose.

For what she wants the picture for yes, to much space.

Cute picture and girl

martinsjc wrote in post #5634744
I like it a lot, but u know whats wrong with it.. a crop like this would have worked much better I think:

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I agree with the cropping. Could use a little more contrast also for my tastes.

Great picture and great model!! I love this pose with her long hair, it is very flattering. Here's my crop and some edits.. practice I guess.. haha

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