Here is a still life I shot for a final assignment. It was actually shot on a 4x5 camera with a leaf back.
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JakPot Senior Member 826 posts Joined Mar 2006 Location: 80203 More info | Jun 05, 2008 21:40 | #1 Here is a still life I shot for a final assignment. It was actually shot on a 4x5 camera with a leaf back.
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scotteisenphotography Never been blessed  4,147 posts Likes: 17 Joined Aug 2007 More info | Jun 05, 2008 21:41 | #2 very, very nice. good job! 2X Canon 1Dx|Canon 1D Mark IV|Canon 5D Mark III|14mm 2.8L II|16-35mm 2.8L II|24mm 1.4L II|35mm 1.4L|50mm 1.2L |85mm 1.2L II|70-200 2.8L IS|200mm 2.0L IS|300mm 2.8L IS|400mm 2.8L IS|800mm 5.6L IS| 580EX II| 600EX RT II|
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jolyn928 Senior Member  487 posts Joined Jul 2007 Location: Central N.C. More info | Jun 05, 2008 21:46 | #3 |
Jun 05, 2008 21:53 | #4 jolyn928 wrote in post #5669474  cute! Not at all the christmas scene I expected! lol, that never crossed my mind when i was coming up with the idea for the shot.
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jolyn928 Senior Member 487 posts Joined Jul 2007 Location: Central N.C. More info | Jun 05, 2008 21:55 | #5 |
zucchini Goldmember  1,097 posts Joined Sep 2007 Location: Oregon More info | Jun 06, 2008 00:03 | #6 Nice idea, setup, everything! Good work! A Camera ~ A Lens ~ A Flash ~ A Tripod
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swapnali Senior Member  655 posts Likes: 1 Joined Mar 2006 Location: Tokyo More info | Jun 06, 2008 00:08 | #7 Great shot and lightings. Swapnali http://www.swapnali.com
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Gordaen Mostly Lurking 13 posts Joined May 2008 Location: Washington State, USA More info | Jun 06, 2008 01:34 | #8 Very nice! I think if you changed the angle a little bit so that the reflections were shorter than the actual objects, you could get in more space at the top (as swapnali suggested) without cutting anything out. The black plate messes with my eyes a little; not sure if that's a good thing or not, haha. Rebel XT + 17-85 f/4 EFS IS USM + big memory card = occasional good shot
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thanks for the feedback so far. I'll keep a closer eye on my angle next time and play a little more with the composition.
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Jun 06, 2008 11:18 | #10 swapnali wrote in post #5670283 Great shot and lightings. IMHO Something in the composition is distracting, I am not sure what. -May be the plate and milk jar is from the same distance from the glass and again too equally spread on left and right??? Sorry not sure. - And need some negative space on top. I think it just needs to be straightened but other than that it looks great The Gear:
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Jun 06, 2008 22:54 | #11 amazing photo Stop talking about your equipment and use it
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