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Jun 06, 2008 16:52 |  #1

I like them but are they just missing something? Or for what they are are they cool?


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Jun 07, 2008 22:12 |  #2

Interesting lines. A sky might help.


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Jun 08, 2008 12:57 |  #3

I dont believe that the windows add anything to this composition, just clutters the image. Suggest you reshoot using a polorising filter to darken a blue sky and with a small amount of processing could achieve a stronger image.

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Jun 08, 2008 15:08 |  #4

Now that's what I was going for. I'll follow your suggestions. Thanks!




  
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Jun 08, 2008 16:27 |  #5

Look forward to seeing your results :)


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Jun 08, 2008 17:49 |  #6

Agree about the sky.


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Jun 08, 2008 17:58 |  #7

chappie wrote in post #5683982 (external link)
I dont believe that the windows add anything to this composition, just clutters the image. Suggest you reshoot using a polorising filter to darken a blue sky and with a small amount of processing could achieve a stronger image.

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I'd get rid of the chimneys too. I like the lines.


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Jun 09, 2008 09:35 as a reply to  @ amethyst dragon's post |  #8

Excellent lesson in symetry. Nice comp.


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