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Jun 06, 2008 17:10 |  #1

Ok guys had my first DSLR going on 2 weeks now...
i decided to mess around and shoot some pics of my kitten marley!
Please let me know what you think... and what i should do to shoot some better pics... Be Gentle haha:(

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Jun 06, 2008 17:32 |  #2

Awww -- Who can resist a kitty like that! What a beauty!

I can't get my cat to sit still long enough myself...

As for CC - I will leave that to others but you need to work on your composition a bit. The second one I would say is quite good - if you had the whole cat in the picture it would be really good.




  
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Jun 06, 2008 17:40 |  #3

Im really new to photography...
whats composition and how can i make that better!


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Jun 06, 2008 17:41 |  #4

and for these i was completly messing around...
the reason for the diffrent tones is because there different color tones used just kind of screwin around


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Jun 06, 2008 18:06 |  #5

Messing around is always good :-)

Some general composition techniques are here -> Link (external link)

For someone just starting out I would recomend learning the Rule of Thirds and the easiest of all "Fill the Frame". Rule of thirds -> link (external link)




  
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Jun 06, 2008 18:23 |  #6

i appreciate the comments and crtiticsm i guess in tim i will get it...
how can you use these rule of thirds for these knds of pictures just curious i can
see landscapes and stuff but sometimes diffrent angles on things are unique and what.


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Jun 06, 2008 18:30 |  #7

Very pretty cat, it looks like you are off to a good start. I will just throw one more thing out there as a general rule.... there are thousands :) anyway, don't cut off feet. weather people or animals, you dont want to cut then ends of their paws, or for people cut their feet out of the picture. Good start though.


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Jun 06, 2008 18:30 as a reply to  @ Thenicky's post |  #8

It is generally accepted that the rule of thirds when shooting portraits/animals is centered around the eyes. In your second shot you did get the eyes in the bottom/left third, but you cut off the paw at an odd spot (try not to cut limbs at joints).

The framing on the first shot is just too low and too far left, and it's creating odd cropping of limbs. Focus is too close to the far edge of the frame with too much dead space on the top/right.


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Jun 06, 2008 18:34 |  #9

yea true! thanks for the great feeback haha the thing is shes a kitten and kittens dont stop moving haha unless shes sleeping... so if i ever get her to sit still what would be the best position when using these rules examples would be great... plus i really dont like to duplicate things i dont want my stuff looking exactly the same....
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Jun 06, 2008 18:50 |  #10

Thenicky wrote in post #5675052 (external link)
yea true! thanks for the great feeback haha the thing is shes a kitten and kittens dont stop moving haha unless shes sleeping... so if i ever get her to sit still what would be the best position when using these rules examples would be great... plus i really dont like to duplicate things i dont want my stuff looking exactly the same....
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Good practice for your panning skills :)


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Jun 06, 2008 18:51 |  #11

lol dont laugh but whats panning i know you shoot moving objects but hoes it done


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Jun 06, 2008 18:54 |  #12

Thats just it, following a moving target while keeping your movements smooth and steady.


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Jun 06, 2008 19:12 |  #13

haha i will try and i can only tryy hahahaha


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