Need Critique on Composition

I need suggestions and comments on composition....

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Is it because the flowers are too central? Some of the flowers are dying? or just a bad shot in general?

J, I would try this one again, perhaps single spray of blooms with the others soflty receding in the BG?

Flo wrote in post #5683452
J, I would try this one again, perhaps single spray of blooms with the others soflty receding in the BG?

Flo, ThanX for your insight.

But actually, I was more concerned with composition. Which of the triangular compositions would work best.
Triangular compositions arent commonly considered, but a Tri-Comp can be as powerful as the ROT or even the Golden Mean when properly defined.

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Pleasing enough, but not extraordinary. The flower on the right needs to be in focus if everything else is sharp. The background is pleasing, except for whatever is on the right.

Jam, I think having four points instead of three misses the triangular aspect?

I would say, there are to many things. No specific subject.