Fishermen

I'd like a critique on this shot, I'm not sure I like the composition/subject/pp , but I'd like to get some feedback. Also in a portuguese forum there's a photo contest with the theme " Old People ", not a photography forum, just tech stuff. I was considering entering with this one. C&C away

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In my opinion you cannot get away with having the foreground subject so out of focus.

That ruined an otherwise great shot, for me.

The vignetting is not hurting significantly, but it's not helping much either. A little of that goes a long way.