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Jun 11, 2008 19:56 |  #1

I would like to know what you guys think of this picture, and I should do to make it better.

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Jun 11, 2008 20:15 |  #2

The composition is untouchable and its a great scene. My only comment would be on how soft it appears to be. But I'd never throw it away.


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Jun 11, 2008 21:26 |  #3

I did a High pass on it, is it better.

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Jun 12, 2008 16:06 |  #4

great composition. I only wish there was some one walking or talking or an animal... looks very dry to me. Such wonderful beach always makes my eyes hunt for wonderful women... :-)


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Jun 14, 2008 12:09 |  #5

Well, this is the very popular South Beach and I went there before the people got there, because I wanted a picture of the beach with nobody on it. Less then an hour later, their was people everywhere. I wanted a view of it that people don't really get to see, an empty South Beach. I call it "Beach Conveniently Deserted", witch it never happens at this location.


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