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Jun 11, 2008 22:21 |  #1

Shot this on "Movie Road" just west of Lone Pine, CA in the Alabama Hills. Thoughts?

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Jun 11, 2008 23:04 |  #2

I dig it except for the streak on the right side of the sky. Not much you can do about it though, unless you cloned it out but overall I like the picture!




  
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Jun 11, 2008 23:05 |  #3

Thanks! Yeah I'm assuming the streak is a jet trail. I really liked how the clouds were this day.


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Jun 11, 2008 23:07 as a reply to  @ Laramie's post |  #4

The clouds are amazing. You have interesting foreground detail, all over I think its great. Good work.

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Jun 12, 2008 07:47 |  #5

Hello Cowboylife;

Definately clone out the Vapour Trail - I always look for these in the BG on old "Westerns"!

Apart from that, my inclination would be to crop it to take out the bottom quarter...

That will have the effect of removing the horizon from the mid-line, and place it at a "Rule-of-Thirds" position, which I think gives the image a stronger punch...

Just my 2c worth...

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Jun 12, 2008 10:46 |  #6

nice colors, did you use any filters (i.e. CPL, GND)? or PP?




  
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Jun 12, 2008 10:56 as a reply to  @ MattMoore's post |  #7

looks like you have a couple dust spots in the sky too.

i agree with everything else as well. nice job.




  
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