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Jun 15, 2008 19:25 |  #1

I took these two shots at one of the Savanna squares. I wish the construction barrels were not so visible in the one shot. What would you change and why? Thank you in advance foe any help.


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Jun 16, 2008 11:52 |  #2

Neither of these shots really grabs my attention:( Find one subject and focus on that next time.you will be hooked.;)


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Jun 16, 2008 12:07 |  #3

I think you were really close on these shots. I also agree that there should be some subject within the image. It lacks focus.



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Jun 18, 2008 08:58 |  #4

Gail and Daniel - point taken thank you both for your comments.


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