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Jun 17, 2008 13:04 |  #1

I am very curious about what the general sensus would be on this flower shot. ThanX

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Jun 17, 2008 15:03 |  #2

Hey MJ...

With all that vignetting, it shows are pretty darned dark.and a bit noisy?


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Jun 17, 2008 15:17 |  #3

Flo wrote in post #5739539 (external link)
Hey MJ...

With all that vignetting, it shows are pretty darned dark.and a bit noisy?

Flo, we are in agreement yet again. But tell me, what do you think about the water drops?:)

Here's another flower shot with water drops that were also manufactured in photoshop. ;)

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Jun 17, 2008 15:19 as a reply to  @ midnitejam's post |  #4

I thought they were real, so I guess it works! Lol.


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Jun 17, 2008 15:30 |  #5

Flo wrote in post #5739642 (external link)
I thought they were real, so I guess it works! Lol.

Aaahhh! Thanks--You made my day:cool:


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Jun 17, 2008 19:42 |  #6

I have to agree...I thought the water drops were real too...excellent job in that regards! I really like the first shot...I think it could be a bit sharper (actually they both could be a little sharper), but I love the "feel" of it.

Soooo....you want to share the technique for making the water drops? :D.

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Jun 17, 2008 21:36 |  #7

Walczak Photo wrote in post #5741255 (external link)
Soooo....you want to share the technique for making the water drops? :D.

Peace,
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I would consider it a privilege to be able to return something to this forum for the many tips and much help I've received from it.

Here you go........
1. New layer. Fill with white
2. Filter. Noise. Amount: 400. Monochromatic. Gaussean.
3. Filter Gaussean Blur. Radius: 7 +-
4. Threshold. Move slider left for less drops
5. Gaussean Blur. Radius: <= 1
Merge mask with water-drop layer
6. Magic Wand. Select white background. Delete
7. Inverse selection. Fill with gray (127.127.127)
8. Styles. Bevel and Emboss.
Highlight Mode: Screen. Shadow Mode: Multiply
Increase highlights/Decrease Shadows. OK
9. Blend Mode: Hard Light
10. Dupe BG layer
11. Cntl + Click water drop layer (selects water drops)
Save selection
12. Select Duped BG layer. Hide water-drop layer
13. Filter. Liquify. Uncheck Back Drop. Mask Options 1st icon: select alpha 1
14. Filter. Liquify. Forward Warp. Warp lines beneath water drops. OK
15. Select water-drop layer.
16. Erasure Tool. Erase unwanted water drops


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Jun 17, 2008 23:28 |  #8

midnitejam wrote in post #5738794 (external link)
I am very curious about what the general sensus would be on this flower shot. ThanX

I'm pretty sure sensus isn't a word:p




  
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Jun 17, 2008 23:53 |  #9

That's awesome, wouldn't have known without you saying.


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Jun 18, 2008 09:28 |  #10

I would consider it a privilege to be able to return something to this forum for the many tips and much help I've received from it.

Thanks jam...I will certainly have to give that a try!

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Jun 18, 2008 19:14 |  #11

DrFil wrote in post #5742723 (external link)
I'm pretty sure sensus isn't a word:p

So what's your point?:rolleyes:

Are you saying that you're a better speller than you are a photographer?:lol:

Just kidding--as I know you are also kidding.
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Jun 18, 2008 21:07 |  #12

midnitejam wrote in post #5741930 (external link)
I would consider it a privilege to be able to return something to this forum for the many tips and much help I've received from it.

Here you go........
1. New layer. Fill with white
2. Filter. Noise. Amount: 400. Monochromatic. Gaussean.
3. Filter Gaussean Blur. Radius: 7 +-
4. Threshold. Move slider left for less drops
5. Gaussean Blur. Radius: <= 1
Merge mask with water-drop layer
6. Magic Wand. Select white background. Delete
7. Inverse selection. Fill with gray (127.127.127)
8. Styles. Bevel and Emboss.
Highlight Mode: Screen. Shadow Mode: Multiply
Increase highlights/Decrease Shadows. OK
9. Blend Mode: Hard Light
10. Dupe BG layer
11. Cntl + Click water drop layer (selects water drops)
Save selection
12. Select Duped BG layer. Hide water-drop layer
13. Filter. Liquify. Uncheck Back Drop. Mask Options 1st icon: select alpha 1
14. Filter. Liquify. Forward Warp. Warp lines beneath water drops. OK
15. Select water-drop layer.
16. Erasure Tool. Erase unwanted water drops

Or, arm yourself with a spray bottle next time you shoot those flowers:p


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