TTV - Take Two

Hi all, thanks for all the interesting feed back and tips on my previous TTV post. I thought I'd post my latest attempt here for critique. For those who missed my first attempt you can find it here https://photography-on-the.net/forum/showthre​ad.php?t=523100.

Compared to the first I have added more of the "viewfinder" and switched to using D40x focus points over my XTi originals. I thought the XTi was a little to digital looking. Speaking of digital, I have found I could include the viewfinder LCD in the viewfinder overlay but I thought that would ruin the vintage look. Any thoughts on including/excluding this?

Much better composition this time around....but...it's crooked! Also, as far as the "scene" goes...just a little too much sky there for most taste (I know...b*tch, b*tch, b*tch! LOL!!!). Definitely getting closer!

Peace,
Jim

well maybe a little brighter crop it some and straighten it out. i like the shot other than that

Thanks you two. There are obviously a lot of things technically wrong with this photo. But isn't that supposed to be kind of the point of TTV shots? Of course everything in moderation I guess. Its a little too messed up right?

Peter

i agree the composition is very good