doidinho Goldmember  3,352 posts Likes: 23 Joined Aug 2007 Location: Kenmore, Washington More info | Jul 04, 2008 00:15 | #1 I just got my Skyport today and took this shot of my wifes friend who is doing a movie with her. I'm new to the lighting game, so be easy on me, but bring on the C&C.
Robert McCadden
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khall Goldmember 3,803 posts Joined Mar 2007 Location: Wollongong Australia. More info | Jul 04, 2008 01:26 | #2 Would like to see it just a little bit lighter. No colour separation between the car and his coat. YNWA.
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doidinho THREAD STARTER Goldmember 3,352 posts Likes: 23 Joined Aug 2007 Location: Kenmore, Washington More info | Jul 04, 2008 02:12 | #3 khall wrote in post #5846430  Would like to see it just a little bit lighter. No colour separation between the car and his coat. Thanks for the comment. How would I have done that? I don't think I would want to bring the ambient up any more otherwise I would have lost detail in the sky. The shot was taken with a straight flash about 6' away from the man. I have a convertable shoot through umbrella. Should I have shot through it, moved the flash farther away from the subject and upped the output to light more of the guy? Robert McCadden
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lwest99 Member 64 posts Joined Feb 2008 More info | Jul 04, 2008 08:32 | #4 I am very new to off camera flash also. I would like to see what the umbrella would look like. If you post this in the flash forum Curtis might have an opinion. Still I think it looks great.
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aram535 Goldmember  1,915 posts Joined Sep 2007 Location: Long Island, NY More info | If at all possible, I would say stamp out the jet trail which looks like is coming out of his head. Gear List * www.tranquilphotos.com
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Stickman Goldmember  1,966 posts Likes: 10 Joined Nov 2006 More info | Jul 04, 2008 10:10 | #6 You might have had the light setup pointing a little high, lower could have given a little more separation between the jacket and car. Stick
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