That is a beautiful view and the shot has a ton of potential. What I really like about it is that there is something to look at everywhere in the photo, without any one component overpowering any other.
For me, I don't care for the amount of Cyan cast in the first presentation. I would tone that down a lot. The second offering is better in that respect, but doesn't well show the "low light" aspect of the shot, as there is not much range in luminosity from spot to spot in the photo.
I pulled it into PS, and played with the color cast and the local contrast.
As always, prefaced with "If it were my shot...", but this is the direction I would head.
Rad
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