Eye key

Im not sure is this would be considered high key or not but Im just curious what you all think of this...C&C welcome

Hmmm... Little too much going on for my particular taste.

Great focus on the eye, but I feel the DOF is a little too shallow. I would have liked to see both top & bottom lashes in focus, as well as the eye. I also find the forehead and portion below the makeup (under the eye) to be distracting (blown out).

I like the idea, bright colors, and the crop!

EDIT: Not sure if you intended for her natural eyelash on top to show, but it is visible

ABrownPhoto wrote in post #5890714
Hmmm... Little too much going on for my particular taste.

Great focus on the eye, but I feel the DOF is a little too shallow. I would have liked to see both top & bottom lashes in focus, as well as the eye. I also find the forehead and portion below the makeup (under the eye) to be distracting (blown out).

I like the idea, bright colors, and the crop!

EDIT: Not sure if you intended for her natural eyelash on top to show, but it is visible

Well thanks for the honesty. I do agree about the top portion being blown out and I considered cropping it out but I left it anyways lol.

and yes I know her eyelash is showing lol, it was just my gf playing around with make up and such