Jumping off a bus

took this a couple months ago. he climbed up on top of the bus and did a huge backflip.
added lens flare and some exposure/contrast. it seams a little soft to me but it might just be me?
C&C please, and dont be affraid to be harsh.

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i like it
but not sure about the black and white

i wish there wasnt complete cloud cover though, like the sun was right behind him would be cool

drumebskater wrote in post #5903416
i like it
but not sure about the black and white

i wish there wasnt complete cloud cover though, like the sun was right behind him would be cool

id show you the original but its got deleted off the school server.
i had to make it B/W cus it was very dark outside, it was just about to rain. and the sun actucally was behind him but was hard to see through the clouds.

thanks

pretty sweeet... I might consider tightening the crop...but I like the space you have. I like the B&W myself... color wouldn't really add much and you want to focus on the jump. I big yellow bus would probably detract from the image. (I'm just not sure about the lens flare)

coolness.

Mikelangelo wrote in post #5906081
pretty sweeet... I might consider tightening the crop...but I like the space you have. I like the B&W myself... color wouldn't really add much and you want to focus on the jump. I big yellow bus would probably detract from the image. (I'm just not sure about the lens flare)

coolness.

Thanks