Abandoned House Glamour?

I'm not overly happy with the outcome of this picture, figure some good/bad criticism would help.

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Not fond of the pose or the lighting.

I can get used to the lighting, but the pose is very awkward. She looks depressed and uncomfortable.

I think you need to light up the background or use a little longer exposure to gather more ambient light.

I'm not crazy about the pose either. Pretty model, I'd like to see her eyes in this shot. Also, the clothing does not suggest glamour to me.