Taking the plunge

Here I go, first time letting a lot of people see my work.
*deep breath*

Hope this works:

i see a box with a red X my suggestion would be to make the box bigger and the X a little bit bigger? i like the shadow on the white square but if you play with the flash the shadow can move to be more pronounced? thats all i can think of when seeing the box with the red X.

on a serious note i cant see the images :P

Let's see, you have a pretty model, with a great smile, and wonderful hair. What could anyone find wrong? The shots are bright, cheerful, in focus, with great saturation. Your DOF is real good, isolating your subject a bit.

#1 is great, very interesting angle. I like it.
#2 is good, and I like it. I would have tried a shot with both arms inside the frame, same pose. That looks like it may present some interesting lines with the arms and hands in opposition.

Nice work.

wrussi - sorry - take your complaints to your internet provider....

The pictures look good, she photographs well.

Very nice

nice images, both of them. I like the angle her body is at on #1; shows she has legs and feet. Nice.

very nice shots. gotta love redheads but be careful with the bright spots like in the first photo they are right above her head there on the ground. my eyes went there cause of the bright spot. her head is a bit centered in the second pic. maybe just off center it a bit you would get rid of some of the negative space on the left of her. anyways, those are just little things. still love the photos. can't wait to see more

Thank you everyone.

I didn't even think about her half cut off arm, wow!
Thank you, putting that in the back of my head for the next time.