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Jul 16, 2008 17:18 |  #1

I took this photo early this week, and edited it in adobe photoshop elements. I was trying to create a hot verses cold topical fantasy look. What does everyone think of composition, the colors, etc.??? Comments and critique please!

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Make: Canon
Model: Canon EOS 40D
Shutter Speed: 1/256 second
F Number: F/3.5
Focal Length: 10 mm
ISO Speed: 100
Date Picture Taken: Jul 15, 2008, 2:37:04 AM



  
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Jul 16, 2008 17:21 |  #2

I like it, but I would get rid of the very bright highlights in the background with more black.


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Jul 16, 2008 18:06 |  #3

LeuceDeuce wrote in post #5924009 (external link)
I like it, but I would get rid of the very bright highlights in the background with more black.

I tend to agree with you about the highlights, though with the two sided editing I did I tend to visuallize a dividing line down the middle and the highlights on the left half help distinguish it from the right half in my mind. But that's a very subjective way to look at it obviously. ;)

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Jul 16, 2008 18:11 as a reply to  @ Pierre81385's post |  #4

How did you get your 40D to shoot at 1/256?
I agree with the highlight. I would dim that down a little.


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Jul 16, 2008 18:17 |  #5

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How did you get your 40D to shoot at 1/256?
I agree with the highlight. I would dim that down a little.

Noted! ;) I was using Aperture priority mode to get the most DOF from such a wide focal length and that's the shutter speed selected apparently... lol




  
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Jul 16, 2008 18:20 as a reply to  @ Pierre81385's post |  #6

I tried a crop to tighten it up a bit, while leaving enough of the "hot and cold".
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Jul 16, 2008 18:21 |  #7

I agree with the highlights as well. It didn't really bother me at first. Then after it was pointed out, it seems to be all that I look at. This is just a nice shot that I don't want it ruined by it. IMO...


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Jul 16, 2008 18:22 |  #8

Pierre81385 wrote in post #5924336 (external link)
Noted! ;) I was using Aperture priority mode to get the most DOF from such a wide focal length and that's the shutter speed selected apparently... lol

Ahhh a quick check shows the site I copied the shot info from "deviantART" incorrectly read the data in the photo I uploaded. A check of the original RAW shows a 1/250 exposure NOT 1/256.




  
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Jul 16, 2008 18:24 |  #9

LeuceDeuce wrote in post #5924354 (external link)
I tried a crop to tighten it up a bit, while leaving enough of the "hot and cold".
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I never want to crop my shots, but this is nice! Thanks!




  
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Jul 16, 2008 18:25 |  #10

JenniferLShort wrote in post #5924357 (external link)
I agree with the highlights as well. It didn't really bother me at first. Then after it was pointed out, it seems to be all that I look at. This is just a nice shot that I don't want it ruined by it. IMO...

Lol after it was mentioned now its all I can look at too... I hate when that happens! :confused:




  
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Jul 16, 2008 18:27 |  #11

LeuceDeuce wrote in post #5924354 (external link)
I tried a crop to tighten it up a bit, while leaving enough of the "hot and cold".
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Did you try cloning? I like the bigger picture. The cropped is nice, but I really think you are not doing your original work justice. It is so pretty!


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Jul 16, 2008 18:34 |  #12

JenniferLShort wrote in post #5924403 (external link)
Did you try cloning? I like the bigger picture. The cropped is nice, but I really think you are not doing your original work justice. It is so pretty!

I'm not always that successful with cloning. That would be particularly compilicated near the out of focus flowers to the back... but I'll give it a try!




  
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Jul 16, 2008 18:39 as a reply to  @ JenniferLShort's post |  #13

Cloning is one way (more work than I'm willing to do), but my reasoning for the crop was not because of that. I find that there is just too much dead space around the whole image, and the crop helps keep my eye from wandering around the perimeter.

I spend a lot of time looking at the barely exposed parts of the original image trying to see what's there.

Not suggesting better, just different.


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Jul 16, 2008 18:41 |  #14

Pierre81385 wrote in post #5924376 (external link)
I never want to crop my shots, but this is nice! Thanks!

Is there a reason? You shouldn't let some "standard" format dictate your image. Your image should dictate the format.


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Jul 16, 2008 18:51 |  #15

LeuceDeuce wrote in post #5924474 (external link)
Is there a reason? You shouldn't let some "standard" format dictate your image. Your image should dictate the format.

OCD honestly... and the original format is perfect for desktop wallpaper! I should mention that, while I've branched out since I started, the original purpose of my photography was so I could eventually have some cool desktop wallpapers all my own. ;) I do crop my images from time to time, but I do like to keep to a standard. It drives me crazy to have loads of odd shapes and sizes!!!

BTW are there any tips you can give me on composing with the rule of thirds??? I have such a hard time getting it right, and it looks to me the crop you did followed the rule well.




  
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