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Jul 17, 2008 21:02 |  #1

well im still very new to this, but a friend asked me to shoot her wedding. afterwards we were back at their house and my wife suggested i take this shot of her by this old truck. please tell me what u think.

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Jul 17, 2008 21:17 |  #2

Hmm. Well, I don't like the first one's coloring-- it looks like she's been photoshopped in. But then again, the second one's coloring distracts from the woman too much. Also, the background itself is pretty distracting, too. (is her face a tod out of focus as well?) So, since your image edting-okay is on, I've experimented a little. I think either desature them both a little, or have them both in black in white, along with a tigheter crop keeping the rule of thirds in mind, adds to the picture better than before. (Sorry, I cut off your signature some, ahah.) I played around with the levels a bit in each of them as well.


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One last thing, if you've noticed, I edited out the very bottom of her dress-- you had chopped it off in the photo and I found it unflattering and so I cloned it out.



  
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Jul 17, 2008 21:25 |  #3

I don't usually care for selective coloring, but I liked it in the first one. I liked the crop as well. I guess us Midwesterners just want to see some open space.




  
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