Hmm. Well, I don't like the first one's coloring-- it looks like she's been photoshopped in. But then again, the second one's coloring distracts from the woman too much. Also, the background itself is pretty distracting, too. (is her face a tod out of focus as well?) So, since your image edting-okay is on, I've experimented a little. I think either desature them both a little, or have them both in black in white, along with a tigheter crop keeping the rule of thirds in mind, adds to the picture better than before. (Sorry, I cut off your signature some, ahah.) I played around with the levels a bit in each of them as well.
One last thing, if you've noticed, I edited out the very bottom of her dress-- you had chopped it off in the photo and I found it unflattering and so I cloned it out.