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Mosca
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Jul 19, 2008 10:52 |  #1

Like most people, I've been taking pictures for years. But recently, I've started trying to make photographs. The way I see it, it is easy to get the camera to see what you see... but it is hard to get the camera to make you feel the way you feel when you see it.

Out of hundreds of pictures I've taken over the last 4 months, here are a few that I think came out well, starting of course with my favorite. Any post-picture editing is limited to clicking "auto-correct". These are taken with a G9.

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I actually have one of this where I edited out the dent in the first post:

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I like the colors in this one:

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This one is "artsy-fartsy"... looking up through the skylight. I had to try a few different white balances, this was the closest to what it actually looked like.

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I remember that I screwed up the camera settings on this one, but I forget how. I think it was that I had the resolution too low, and it was not sharp when I printed it out. I still like the way it looks, though:

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I got frustrated fiddling with all the menus on the G9, so I bit the bullet and upgraded to a 40D. I took a dozen shots and then my 17yo daughter borrowed it, and I didn't get it back for 2 days! Here is her first picture, of the neighbor's pup. I have to say, she takes a nice picture:

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Criticize constructively, please. Although I like the way the pictures appear, I still consider them the equivalent of juvenalia, and I am thirsty to improve.

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Jul 19, 2008 12:50 |  #2

Welcome Mosca.

Half the battle is won when one realizes that there is a difference between "snapshots" and "photographs". The other half is hard work and the ability to keep in mind (while you are framing the photo) all of the elements that affect - either positively or negatively - the final outcome of each image. This discipline takes time to become second nature and honestly, I still haven't gotten to the point that I am taking all elements into consideration on every photo, but it's slowly improving for me.

One thing that I have to keep in mind is that success is more frequent when I keep in mind that the background is as important as the subject itself. In the first photo, a simple angle change such as shooting from the subject's front-left would eliminate the overly bright/distracting background and draw the intended attention to your subject. Framing the subject without cutting off 1/3's man and 1/2 dog would improve things as well.

On photo #2, waiting 1/2 second longer would allow the riverboat to clear the pine tree and shooting from a slightly lower perspective would allow the buildings in the background to be framed between the two pines (even though they are not the subject this would help complete the photo). Using a smaller aperture might allow the riverboat to come into clearer focus.

Pretty good effort on #3. Framed a little close on the right. Watch for things "growing out of" your subjects such as the light pole growing out of the car hop's head.

Paying close attention to keeping the horizon level helps as well since this affects the picture as a whole.

So many details - so little time.:)

Glad you found our forum, mosca. Keep posting.

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Mark


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Jul 19, 2008 14:01 |  #3

Thank you; I can see exactly what you mean in each instance. Seriously, I think I must walk tilted to the right; I need to put a level on the camera!In the third shot, the parking lot IS angled; see how the girl is leaning back on her skates? But if you look at the awning, I still tilted the camera!

I'll learn how to use the tool; what I need is to learn how to make it see.


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Jul 19, 2008 15:13 |  #4

I like your abstract shot the best.




  
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