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Jul 19, 2008 15:03 |  #1

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Jul 19, 2008 15:11 |  #2

Very nice work!




  
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Jul 19, 2008 15:19 |  #3

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Jul 19, 2008 22:04 |  #4

Wow...very nice PP. If I had to critique something about it, it would be that there is a little too much white space to the left for my tastes.


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Jul 19, 2008 22:34 as a reply to  @ Lee123's post |  #5

Very nice.


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Jul 20, 2008 13:00 |  #6

nice work! looks pretty natural. maybe next time,try with colored bg?


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Jul 24, 2008 16:47 as a reply to  @ howzitboy's post |  #7

What technique was used here if you do not mind? TY.




  
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Jul 24, 2008 21:56 |  #8

very nice but a lot of white


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Jul 26, 2008 11:06 |  #9
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White doesn't bother me, because it's a sort of beach/summer look.

To be honest. I think a coloured background would suck. Still each to their own. Oh, unless it was a very light blue, that would be cool.

The flower is a bit bright in the second one (distracts my eye from the face).

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Jul 26, 2008 11:14 |  #10

love how the skin looks so dewy and fresh!


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Jul 26, 2008 11:39 |  #11

Very nice work, just lower the brightness.


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Jul 26, 2008 20:00 |  #12

I say leave the brightness as is and add a contrasting color to the background. Other than that I wish I could do PP like that. FARIS, YOU'RE MY HERO!!!!:)


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vgk1nka1dx wrote in post #5990332 (external link)
I say leave the brightness as is and add a contrasting color to the background. Other than that I wish I could do PP like that. FARIS, YOU'RE MY HERO!!!!:)

IMHO the face IS contrasted by the light background. I can't think of a background that would suit it more (other than light blue).

Maybe I don't know all the 'rules' you should follow. But I feel a light cool colour suits this sea-side feel of the picture.

Maybe rub a light burn on the right shoulder to bring it out a bit.

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Jul 28, 2008 03:16 |  #14

Wow impressive work


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