nw85887 wrote in post #5947763
They are all pretty nice.
1) Too blue for me and I am not completely sure what the subject is. I think it is the rock on the left, but then it gets cut off at the bottom.
It was really the black/blue/green colors rather than the objects.
2) Nice, a bit too cool (blue) for me and background is a bit overexposed.
Yeah I have like 30 shots on this space alone, I was trying to get both in, but even with -2,0,+2 I couldn't get both the sky and the rocks to be in proper exposure. I decided there wasn't much to see in the sky anyway. In the original description I said I warmed it up, that was incorrect, I cooled it down with a blue filter sorry. It might be too much but I'm usually drawn to more of the cold pictures.
3) Horizon is crooked and the wood railing ends too soon for me (would have like to see it terminate exactly at the upper-left corenr of the frame).
You're right, I fixed it in 2, missed it here, I must have moved my tripod after setting it up and didn't realize bubble was off.
4) Too much deadspace, frame the buidling/house and the moon more (zoom in).
I think the water line adds something, the only dead space is either the very top or top and left? But framing the moon to the corner makes it look weird, no?
5) I would have like to see you frame up the sun and the lifeguard tower a bit more (fill frame with only the sun in the upper left and the tower in the lowerish right).
I do agree that it would have been a good shot. The one I had setup for was the sun shining through the windows of the tower, but by the time I dragged my butt down there to get into the focal range and set it up the sun was too high up in the sky and too bright.
This was all at a little impromptu. I woke up at 4:10am for no good reason, went to dunking donuts for a cup of coffee and instead of turning around and coming home just drove to beach. Next time I'll have a better shot list planned in my head.