Three more from the day C& C all ways valued..

The first shot looks like it is in open shade and is good lighting.

The second shot looks too overexposed - the highlights are clipping but could be salvaged if shot in RAW.

I have darkened this third one, in the mid tones and it seems better to me, but you must be the final judge.

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Robert_Lay wrote in post #5950292
The first shot looks like it is in open shade and is good lighting.

The second shot looks too overexposed - the highlights are clipping but could be salvaged if shot in RAW.

I have darkened this third one, in the mid tones and it seems better to me, but you must be the final judge.

Yes that worked well thanks Robert....

Very nice use of flash (right? No exif, but the first two seem to have used it). My only suggestion would be to straighten the horizon in the second.

actually all of you horizons are crooked. #1 you may have to do some warping to keep the horizon and the table edge parallel.

1&3 are composed well.
2&3 are blown. Boost the flash and pull down the exposure
#2 has a nice expression bit its is hard to tell what she is actually doing. Maybe the crop is too tight to see what is going on in the picture.

Thanks so much for all your advice points noted and hope to improve....

griptape wrote in post #5953526
Very nice use of flash (right? No exif, but the first two seem to have used it). My only suggestion would be to straighten the horizon in the second.

Thanks ...Not sure where the EXIF went it wasn't resized it was hosted by photobucket...