You have some really great expressions from this bird here and some fine "forward thrust" in focus photography of the bird. These shots are dieing for some detailed post processing because they are so fantastic as is, especially the last shot. That is really a beautiful "moment" photo!
Suggestions:
Do some selective sharpening of the subject
Increase contrast, but not to the point that it is unreal looking
Crop the bird so that the focus is on the expression, but don't center compose on the mouth, leave it offset a bit
Clone out the incidental twigs that are easy to dissolve into the background, especially the one closest to the mouth.
I also added a bit of saturation to the head and especially the eyes in order to draw attention to the emotion and moment
Here's a quick example of what I am suggesting above, hope you don't mind. I would not do this normally but suggestions were asked for so here goes...
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Mark II and III; 17-40L; 24-70L; 50/1.8; 85/1.2L; 70-200/2.8L IS; 200/1.8L; 100-400L IS; Sigma 50-500; 1.4x, 2x extenders.
Looking to help fund another's 5D II purchase with $1200.00 Canadian 4 their ol' 5D Mark I (then I can cancel my order, get some fullframe & save some cash)
Dream on