My first time Bikini Shoot

This was my first time working with a model let me know what you think. Any pointers would help.

Thanks

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On the one the left has a leaf in her face. I like the bw conversion.

#1 has much too much flora in the scene.
The pose could be a lot more graceful. Doesn't look very relaxed and both legs are cut off at the knee - ouch!

#2 has a much more attractive pose, but the garland of flowers is a bit too much, and is very intrusive. Unfortunately, the background is about as bad as they come.

Thanks Mr.Robert I will take all the help I can get.