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Aug 05, 2008 00:37 |  #1

would this be a good picture for an ad?

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don't worry about the text.;)

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Aug 05, 2008 09:25 |  #2

I had to look twice to realize those were fingers..looks somewhat odd to me...think I would rather see the side of the hand, it gives it some elegance, then the ring would pop up from the hand instead of being static,...but thats just me before any coffee this morning.:o


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Aug 05, 2008 10:04 as a reply to  @ Flo's post |  #3

I like the layout, but I agree with Flo, I was looking more at what was holding the ring then the ring...

Love the quote!

If anything I'd just make the whole background black, or add color to the fingers. I like the later more.


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Aug 05, 2008 11:41 as a reply to  @ LeesaB's post |  #4

Okay I have to be difficult and disagree with everyone else (Jeez! What is my problem? LOL)

I really like this, I was immediately drawn to the ring and then recognized right away that they were fingers, the saying is great too.
It's very artsy.
I think it's a winner!:)


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Aug 05, 2008 11:49 |  #5

I would like it without the fingers (all black) and I think that the ring is a little blueish purple.




  
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Aug 05, 2008 12:57 |  #6

Flo wrote in post #6049947 (external link)
think I would rather see the side of the hand, it gives it some elegance, then the ring would pop up from the hand instead of being static.:o

what do you mean by the side of the hand?


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Aug 05, 2008 13:57 |  #7

Kathy H wrote in post #6050742 (external link)
Okay I have to be difficult and disagree with everyone else (Jeez! What is my problem? LOL)

I really like this, I was immediately drawn to the ring and then recognized right away that they were fingers, the saying is great too.
It's very artsy.
I think it's a winner!:)

+1, you can easily tell it is a bunch of fingers...

a great piece of work in my opinion

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what do you mean by the side of the hand?

I think she means more of a side profile of the fingers, than a view from above...i think


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Aug 05, 2008 14:04 |  #8

What I see works for an ad but I see all black, no fingers:confused:


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Aug 05, 2008 14:10 |  #9

short5 wrote in post #6051651 (external link)
What I see works for an ad but I see all black, no fingers:confused:

I think you need to adjust the brightness on your monitor then. :rolleyes:


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Aug 05, 2008 14:16 |  #10

I knew my monitor sucked and was too dark but geez this really showed it. I like it better all black.


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Aug 10, 2008 04:20 |  #11

thanks to all your advice, but I did go with Kathy H and Harm on this one.

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