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Aug 13, 2008 13:03 |  #1

first I would like to say thanks to you for helping me with my competitions pictures. It helps me a lot.

Now I need help making a choice. This is for a competition called "Office Supply" and I took pictures of some post it. but I can't decide which one I should enter.
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Aug 13, 2008 13:05 |  #2

Number 5 is calling to me the most.


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Aug 13, 2008 13:38 |  #3

Tough choice between 2 & 5 for me....I'd probably go with #2....#5 would have won, if the edge of the blue post-it notes was aligned up with the orange...creating a nice smooth seam....


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Aug 13, 2008 13:41 as a reply to  @ Anke's post |  #4

I like #1.

#2 needs more DOF to me (it's probably similar in DOF to #1, but the different crop makes it seem shallower). The others I see paper, but I don't necessarily connect to office supply. #1 it's clearly Post-its, which connects more to the theme for me.


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Aug 13, 2008 13:50 |  #5

3 5 or 8
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Aug 13, 2008 14:03 |  #6

here's 2 more

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Aug 13, 2008 14:09 |  #7

....you aligned the edges up, didn't you?

good man....

#9 wins it for me


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Aug 13, 2008 14:11 |  #8

yes i did


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Aug 13, 2008 14:16 |  #9

looks much better...


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Aug 13, 2008 14:37 |  #10

thanks.

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Aug 13, 2008 14:38 as a reply to  @ DozerLYP's post |  #11

#9 is probably my new choice, too.


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Aug 13, 2008 15:35 |  #12

Even though 10 looks almost exactly the same as 5, 5 still winning.


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Aug 13, 2008 17:17 as a reply to  @ Anke's post |  #13

#1;)


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Aug 13, 2008 18:03 |  #14

Ok, here's one more, a little different.

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