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Grand Haven, MI. Light house at dusk

 
paulie8pointer
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Aug 13, 2008 13:29 |  #1

How can I improve these....thanks for any help - Paulie

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Aug 13, 2008 15:10 |  #2

I dont think there is anything wrong with the second one. the first one however doesnt have good composition IMO and it seems a bit softer than #2


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Aug 13, 2008 22:09 |  #3

I like #1 better because the colors seem more realistic.


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Aug 15, 2008 20:48 |  #4

It's been ages since I've walked that pier!!! I have to find my way down there before we're swallowed by cold weather, again. It's coming sooner than you think! heh heh

As for the photos, I like #1 better... the color are more realistic, like ROBERT said... and they just pop. Well done.


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Aug 17, 2008 01:05 |  #5

I like the colors and perspective of #1 a little better than 2, but they are both fantastic photos!


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