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Aug 18, 2008 12:14 |  #1

Any help on this one. I did not want to make the scene dark & gloomy but i don't know if this works or not!


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Aug 18, 2008 12:39 |  #2

The crop is way off to me? The tips of the building are missing...I would rid myself of the tree to the side,.its very bright for sure..

If this could be a redo.I would take another really.;) but I see where you were trying to go with this.


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Aug 18, 2008 12:46 |  #3

Agree on the crop. And on a personal level I'd like to see this as an HDR.


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Aug 18, 2008 12:47 as a reply to  @ Flo's post |  #4

Too, bright/saturated/contr​asty, need my shades to look at it :cool:


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Aug 18, 2008 13:26 |  #5

I like it. Turn the saturation and brightness down a notch, but I dig the contrast. Also, the flower on the bottom right is a bit distracting, maybe clone it out? Finally, the right side of the building makes me wonder what the rest of the church looks like. I'd recommend either cropping it out or, if possible, open the right side up, so we can see more of the building.

Edit: Oh, and I like the tree on the left side. It frames and draws attention to the gravestones.




  
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Aug 18, 2008 13:38 as a reply to  @ thefooz's post |  #6

Thanks for all your comments and help on this one.
I will keep everything in mind when i reshoot the Scene.

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Aug 18, 2008 14:13 |  #7

A sky replacement would be nice. Shooting in better light would be ideal. Try dawn or dusk with a tripod.

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Aug 18, 2008 16:45 as a reply to  @ griptape's post |  #8

I have added a new sky and cloned the tops of the missing spires?. The cloning of the spires needs more work and the image has lost a bit of quality as I had to reduce it to post.

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Aug 18, 2008 19:46 |  #9

Mintam wrote in post #6131308 (external link)
Thanks for all your comments and help on this one.
I will keep everything in mind when i reshoot the Scene.

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I look forward to it!:D


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