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Aug 18, 2008 12:59 |  #1

Straight out of camera. Would like some pointers on what to do with the shot. I like the firework explosion and the jump. Any ideas? no USM nothing, literally OOC.

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Aug 18, 2008 14:20 |  #2

greenxeyezz wrote in post #6130999 (external link)
Would like some pointers on what to do with the shot.

Print it.




  
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Aug 18, 2008 15:10 as a reply to  @ griptape's post |  #3

looks pretty damn good, if you have to edit it (some people can't resist :lol:) I think some of the splash is worth cleaning up like infront of the guy towards the middle. But that's the smallest of nit picks possible.

Do you mind me asking what lens you used for this one?


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Aug 18, 2008 15:18 |  #4

KarlosDaJackal wrote in post #6131936 (external link)
Do you mind me asking what lens you used for this one?

According to the exif the 85mm 1.2.




  
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Aug 18, 2008 15:21 |  #5

griptape wrote in post #6131975 (external link)
According to the exif the 85mm 1.2.

Thanks, i think my exif plugin and become unplugged, must fix it now.


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Aug 18, 2008 17:27 as a reply to  @ KarlosDaJackal's post |  #6

Personally,I would ever so slightly reduce the saturation of the orange as it seems a bit overpowering and reduce the magenta/purple glow on the dolphin. Nothing else though, its a great shot. :D



  
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Aug 19, 2008 18:27 as a reply to  @ conkeroo's post |  #7

hey I went to sea world too, I took this one with 50mm f1.4. Yours looks sharper though, good shot.


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Aug 20, 2008 22:03 |  #8

thanks everyone for the kind comments, ill see what I can do with a bit of tweeking


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