Trash the house not the model 2: Nathan

Continueing on from https://photography-on-the.net/forum/showthre​ad.php?t=555905


This is Nathan (and Miss Phloss). He was orginally one of the photographers, but we started with more photographers than models, and he kindly did some modeling, which he did very well at.

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would have cloned out the sore on his mouth on 1 and 3 to make it more appealing. thanks for sharing.

Looks more like a piercing than a sore to me.

Nice job, Moppie!

T.D. wrote in post #6147096
Looks more like a piercing than a sore to me.

Nice job, Moppie!

Cheers,

Yip, it is a piercing, a very large one too.

I love the colours in 1. The pink hair contrasts nicely with the green of the house.

I like the composition in 3, and the texture of the roof.

2. Is also cool, but I find the background too sharp & dominating the image. I think it would work better with the focus more on him, and the background being there but not dominating the picture.

akiwi wrote in post #6149483
I love the colours in 1. The pink hair contrasts nicely with the green of the house.

I like the composition in 3, and the texture of the roof.

2. Is also cool, but I find the background too sharp & dominating the image. I think it would work better with the focus more on him, and the background being there but not dominating the picture.

Appreciate your feedback Peter.
Number 2 is at F5, I can't go much wider, at 23mm I think I can only get to about F4, and there was no room to shoot with a longer lens.
But your very right about the background, this is the only shot of a series I did in the window. In the rest the buildings are simply to sharp and strong.