. The following are two I took with the idea of leading lines, but neither are up to what I want to submit:
Mostly there is too much distraction and greenery drawing away fro the main subject.
#1: (just not enough contrast on the man. Growth on right is too dark as is the boardwalk.)
#2: (this leaves much to interpretation. There is no obvious clear focal point or focus of the lines - which could easily be a person sitting on the end of the slide or just leaving the slide, but there is no person). I just love the way the slide and the stairs make you focus on that point just in front of the slide. I also was upset the slide was over exposed and blown out.
Honest, even brutal, C&C is wanted and appreciated.
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