my first e-shoot ever

I think i was going to produce some beter stuff, if the same day there wasnt delay on the tube, and all of us were on time for the shoots, but to the end of the day we were latte and i need to act quite fast, and I'll be more than happy if you give som CC, thanks.

you should have incorporated the ferris wheel into it more. that would have been greattttttttt. but i like it. very strobist.

Her eye looks a bit blue in #4, sort of unnatural. Also where is the purple light on his shirt in a couple of the shots coming from?

I definitely like the shoots, very impressive!

Last one is my favorite in terms of composition. A little fill flash from camera right (or maybe a reflector) to fill in the shadows, and the shot would be near perfect. Nice job overall

Great for a first shot I'd say

Drop on by the SE-UK Thread if you have some time, lots of local photogs in there