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First real non-people shot in years.

 
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Aug 25, 2008 15:21 |  #1

I wouldn't consider myself someone with an eye for photography when it comes to my natural environment. I lack focus and motivation to do so, because I enjoy capturing people so much more. But I was out today and decided to force myself to take some shots. So... This doin' anything for anyone? Don't feel obligated to be polite.

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Aug 25, 2008 15:23 |  #2

First one is a nice idea, but the bokeh really is not agreeing with me. Second one is doing nothing for me.


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Aug 25, 2008 16:00 as a reply to  @ KarlosDaJackal's post |  #3

I actually like the second one much better, fallen rose bloom. Good for you to venture out of that comfy zone every once in a while.;)


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Aug 25, 2008 17:45 |  #4

Maybe it's just me, but the sign in the first one seems very slightly out of focus?

I like the framing in the second one!


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Aug 25, 2008 21:44 as a reply to  @ Cdeming's post |  #5

Both Images: too saturated and too much sharpening. The sharpening should have been applied selectively rather than globally because sharpening and bokeh go together like oil and water.

Second Image: Lack of good dynamic range (too dark). The wilted rose in the picture besides being too dark does not tell me anything about the composition.


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Aug 25, 2008 23:01 |  #6

bill boehme wrote in post #6178072 (external link)
Both Images: too saturated and too much sharpening. The sharpening should have been applied selectively rather than globally because sharpening and bokeh go together like oil and water.

Second Image: Lack of good dynamic range (too dark). The wilted rose in the picture besides being too dark does not tell me anything about the composition.

And sometimes it just is what it is.lol.although I agree, but it is the better of the two.;)


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Aug 26, 2008 14:31 |  #7

Thanks for the comments all. Much appreciated.




  
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