I like this shot. The pose is a little unusual but very nice because of this. (It's not unusual as in bad, but unusual as in uncommon.) I also like the tone of the image.
About the only thing that really bothers me is the large wing on the right. I don't mind the clipped wingtip of the lower left bird but the large wing is a bother, especially because it blocks a bird in the water.
It also looks a little underexposed but I just turned my monitor on so it could be me.
As to a recommendation my only one would be to wait for less clutter in the background. This isn't bad, but less would have been better.