I took this at a bridal session, she was helping us hold the boquet and when my husband walked up she became very shy......Please C&C
dman726749 Member 168 posts Likes: 1 Joined Nov 2007 Location: Avon IN More info | Sep 01, 2008 15:08 | #2 cute shot, the b/w conversion could use some work though.... Dustin Your Local High School Photography Teacher!
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Sep 01, 2008 15:27 | #3 What kind of "work" do you mean? Melissa
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madhatter04 Goldmember 1,930 posts Likes: 52 Joined Oct 2006 Location: Southern California More info | Sep 01, 2008 16:01 | #4 It needs more contrast, IMO. A good B&W photo should have every value from black to white present, and this one hovers in the middle ranges. Designer // Art Director // Photographer
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dman726749 Member 168 posts Likes: 1 Joined Nov 2007 Location: Avon IN More info | Sep 01, 2008 16:04 | #5 madhatter04 wrote in post #6220901 It needs more contrast, IMO. A good B&W photo should have every value from black to white present, and this one hovers in the middle ranges. bingo...its verry muddy, like it was just desaturated....try an adjustment layer of channel mixer to do your b/w conversion, and then if need be another adjsutment layer of levels, curves, or contrast...what ever is your cup o' tea Dustin Your Local High School Photography Teacher!
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Kauaicrazed Senior Member 778 posts Joined Oct 2007 Location: Orange County, Ca More info | Sep 01, 2008 16:50 | #6 yep it looks muddy. Could be a nice photo though.
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rmr21 Goldmember 1,938 posts Likes: 2 Joined Jul 2008 More info | I agree with what the others have said about the conversion. Adorable little girl though! ..............
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Sep 01, 2008 17:40 | #8 Thanks to all the C&C, I will work on this one some more. Melissa
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ed. Goldmember 2,978 posts Joined Oct 2006 Location: 2114.syd.nsw.au More info | Sep 01, 2008 18:49 | #9 Cute girl! http://www.edwardhor.com
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Sep 01, 2008 21:18 | #10 I have image editing on if anyone can show me what they are talking about??? Any help is greatly appreciated. I have photoshop and I am still learning how to use it. Melissa
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lavable Member 51 posts Joined Dec 2007 More info | Hey there, what an adorable photo!
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Sep 01, 2008 21:34 | #12 Thanks for the help. I do like you edit and now I see what is being said. Melissa
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palerider Mostly Lurking 19 posts Joined Oct 2007 Location: Oklahoma More info |
Sep 03, 2008 15:28 | #14 Thanks for showing me your edits...it does help explain the comments. Melissa
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