I am still learning, all C&C appreciated and thanks in advance...
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Kiddo Goldmember 2,243 posts Joined Jan 2007 Location: Canada More info | Sep 01, 2008 15:14 | #3 I really like the third and 4th ones that you posted... thanks for sharing.. The second one, maybe a different angle or something?? And the first one... as I was told by a well know photographer... Try not to put anything on the train... It kind of "ties" the bride down... But all in all, I think that you did a good job.. http://www.tanyaeverettphotography.com/
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paul33 Senior Member 380 posts Likes: 1 Joined Aug 2002 Location: Peterborough, UK More info | Sep 01, 2008 16:37 | #4 Decent effort but you've given yourself a tough lighting challenge there with subject in shade and a bright sunny backdrop. I would have looked for a more neutral background in order to bring out better colour in the subject. Nene Digital Wedding Photography
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Keithaba Member 211 posts Joined Jul 2008 Location: Louisville, KY More info | Sep 01, 2008 17:16 | #5 paul33 wrote in post #6221057 Decent effort but you've given yourself a tough lighting challenge there with subject in shade and a bright sunny backdrop. I would have looked for a more neutral background in order to bring out better colour in the subject. That's right along the lines of what I was thinking. If you shot these exact same shots about 3-4 hours later, you would have had dramatically different outcome in terms of color and contrast. The shots are good, but the conditions under which you shot make it pretty tough to get a balanced photo without blown out highlights. 40D \ 350D \ 17-55 2.8 \ 70-300 IS \ 60mm 2.8 macro \ 28-135 IS \ Tamron 28-75 2.8 \ 580 EXII
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Sep 01, 2008 17:44 | #6 Thanks for the C&C....Yes the lighting was terrible. Unfortunately that is the time we were able to get together. She is a freind and is wearing a cheap dress I bought to practice photos with. I will definately try these again at a later time of day....THANKS Melissa
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Skrim17 The only TPBMer without a title. Enjoying my anonymity. 40,070 posts Likes: 2 Joined Jul 2006 Location: In my tree More info | Sep 01, 2008 17:46 | #7 you could increase the contrast a bit, did you do any processing of the images? Crissa
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JakPot Senior Member 826 posts Joined Mar 2006 Location: 80203 More info | using fill flash here would have helped balance the background to the subject. The subject looks dull/flat... don't be afraid of using flash in these situations.
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Philco Senior Member 940 posts Likes: 4 Joined Nov 2005 Location: SandyEggo, CA. More info | Sep 01, 2008 19:22 | #9 I agree with what was said above...if you're in charge, pick a better time if you can. Reality is that you never get to pick the time of day for a wedding, so you do have to learn how to make the best use of the light where you are. In this case, that would probably mean exposing for the background and filling the foreground with flash, or split the difference and use a big reflector to bounce some light back onto the bride. Once the light is balanced, I think a wider aperture would go a long way toward separating the bride from the background. F2.8 or wider would make quite a difference, especially when it comes to creating an image that stands apart from a snapshot. Canon 5D MKIII/Canon 5D MKII/ 70-200 F2.8 IS L / 24-70 F2.8L / 85 F1.2L II/ 35 f1.4L / 135 F2.0L / Canon 600 EX-RT X 2
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Sep 01, 2008 21:16 | #10 I am still learning how to work with light and flash. I will have another go at it. Thanks for all the help. I did a little post processing, but I am still learning that too. Melissa
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cjimenez Member 57 posts Joined Feb 2008 Location: Las Vegas, NV More info | Sep 06, 2008 00:42 | #11 Is she squinting, or is the sun really bright? Or is that her natural smile. I am not being mean I was just curious, I promise. MOMIKE
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wroberts Member 87 posts Joined Sep 2005 More info | This is my try at it, a quick 2 min. The 4th is a great pose; yes you did put yourself in horrible light situation, but you learn. Use your resources to your advantage (photoshop, actions if you have them). Keep up the good work. Thanks,
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I like the edit....I have been working on it a bit and will try to repost my attempts. It is her natural smile and yes the sun was bright, so it may be a little of both. We are going to try a TTD session tomorrow. Thanks again for the comments and edits. Melissa
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tedBalog Senior Member 328 posts Joined Jun 2008 Location: Rittman, OH More info | I think they would look better with some strong contrast. 5D | 24-70mm f/2.8L | 70-200mm f/2.8L IS | 70-200mm f/4L | 85mm f/1.8
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