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chauncey

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Sep 06, 2008 10:29 | #1

Been working on this photomerge, trying to get it down right and I need crop help.
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I would go with a square crop but I don't know if the image is strong enough.
Could add more on the right if it would help.

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Sep 06, 2008 11:09 | #2

Nice image. The biggest fault that I can suggest is that the bird(s) is/are flying off the edge of the image. If you could move them to the left side, so that they're flying into it, it would be more compelling.

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Sep 06, 2008 12:26 | #3

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+1 on what joedlh said

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Sep 06, 2008 12:28 | #4

You should sell.

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Sep 06, 2008 12:42 | #5

Please disregard the comment above.

I apparently read "Really need crap advice" instead of 'Crop'.

:confused:

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Sep 06, 2008 12:56 | #6

The dead space on the left is killing your image so I did a 10x8 crop.

Always leave space for the bird to fly into.

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Sep 06, 2008 18:11 | #7

PhotoJourno wrote in post #6253644

Please disregard the comment above.

I apparently read "Really need crap advice" instead of 'Crop'.

:confused:

That has certainly raised a smile here

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Sep 06, 2008 18:58 as a reply to @ *Sonic*'s post | #8

You folks sure were right, makes a world of difference.
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Sep 07, 2008 03:28 | #9

chauncey wrote in post #6255340

You folks sure were right, makes a world of difference.
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much better

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Sep 07, 2008 07:00 | #10

PhotoJourno wrote in post #6253644

Please disregard the comment above.

I apparently read "Really need crap advice" instead of 'Crop'.

:confused:

ROFL.....i enjoyed this one....!

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