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Sep 08, 2008 15:46 |  #1

One more for a contest about "Red and Black"

Witch one do you like the most, or what trick should I try on taken the picture?

I'm using natural light on my windowsill. and this is the same picture.

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Sep 08, 2008 15:57 |  #2

That avatar is awesome.

Ase far as the pictures go.

#1 is a tad dark with bad shadows.
#2 is good, but you've lost the detail on the side.
#3 The background does not work for me.

The image also looks a bit lifeless as is and a tad soft on the bottom of the pepper. The color looks good.

But you just asked for my opinion, so don't be offended I'm no pro.




  
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Sep 08, 2008 16:02 |  #3

I don't like the 3rd one even a little bit...it just looks completely dull. If I had to choose from the other 2, it would be the first. Also not a pro, but know what I like.


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Sep 08, 2008 16:02 |  #4

2 wins it for me.


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Sep 08, 2008 16:41 |  #5

I agree with Jeff, of the 3, #2 is the best. I don't like #3 at all.


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Sep 08, 2008 16:42 |  #6

2 except I wish the backdrop was actually black :(


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Sep 08, 2008 16:47 |  #7

Another vote for #2. I think you need a little fill on the left side.


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Sep 08, 2008 16:51 |  #8

I changed the angle a little and different DOF

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Sep 08, 2008 18:16 |  #9

#4 looks best. Now it feels like I'm at the eye doctor.




  
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Sep 08, 2008 18:18 |  #10

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#4 looks best. Now it feels like I'm at the eye doctor.

I'd agree. But, you need to burn the BG in the bottom right so that it's black.


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Sep 08, 2008 18:57 |  #11

thanks again, I've fixed the bottom part here

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Sep 08, 2008 19:07 |  #12

#1 or #5 for me, but all appear soft.

I would also clone out the dust.




  
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Sep 08, 2008 19:08 |  #13

I think you've achieved the look. Good job.




  
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