Other than a few halos that are a bit on the bright side, I think that you did a very good job of capturing details in the image at a time of day when the shadows are rather deep and the sky is still bright.
This image is a good example of when HDR can be applied to best advantage because it is not being subjected to some of the things that can be problematic in HDR images such as grass and trees moving in the wind, water waves such as on a lake or ocean, or people and vehicles moving through the scene and producing a wispy blur.
cwmehring wrote in post #6283714
As for HDR, its not just shadows that your looking to bring out, its just the full range of colors that an eye can see but a camera can't capture.
I am not sure that you said what you meant here, but if the camera can't capture it, then HDR can't bring out colors that weren't captured. 
If you meant using HDR to be able to capture a wider range of colors than a single exposure when the dynamic range of sight in the scene exceeds the sensor's range, you are correct to a certain extent, but it is sort of a mixed bag. Digital SLR camera sensors do have a wide gamut that is larger than the AdobeRGB colorspace, but not close to the full range of colors that the eye can see. In any event, after creating an HDR image, it has to be processed to a simpler image that will fit within the display capability of a monitor or within the color gamut of a CMYK printer onto a paper with a brightness range that is smaller than what can be displayed on a monitor. For most monitors and printers, you can't get anything better than something that lies entirely within the sRGB colorspace. The end result is that the range of colors will need to be compressed into a smaller subset and in many cases, colors may be clipped when being compressed into a smaller gamut.