KATHERINE

Here are a few shots of Katherine. These were taken in a local park in the early evening. I used my 100mm f2.8 as well as the 28-105. I also used my Vivitar 285HV bounced into a silver umbrella. My wife held a reflector for some of the shots. Looking back now, I should have increased the light a little as they look a little dark on the screen. However, the prints look very good. Any critique is appreciated. Thank you.

I like number 1. Number 2 lacks impact - the subject needs to be brighter in relation to the background, number 3 is fine but I prefer the colour of number 1 to the B/W treatment.

1 and 3 are great, as phil pointed out, number 2 needs more light on the subject.

Beautiful girl #1 is really a nice capture and #2 could be with a bit of tweaking to it. Good Job!

good work

I agree with #1, lovely shot. #2 is dark but the cropped foot bothers me. The light can be fixed, the foot can't. #3 doesn't do her justice, she's a pretty lady.

I like #1, Well done!

I like #1 but it could use a little fill light or a reflector.

Pretty
I like them, she looks like a movie star

I agree with the others, but as we all know, lugging a reflector around to a public place is sure to bring unwanted attention. Overall, I thought you did a nice job.