First E-Session Please CC, Second one coming up!!!

Good job for the second one. First two suggestions for me was:

1) Rule of Thirds. Learn it and use it. It works well!

2) On the first shoot, second shot... NEVER cut off feet at the ankle. Kills me when people do that. Include all or crop tighter, one of the two. Otherwise it gives them the "Lost the foot in the war" look.

Great improvement on the second shoot!!!!

Thanks for everyones advise, tips and cautions... Any and all pointer/tips are welcome for my first wedding gig... I'm currently trying to look at every post by tim and crazypictures.. Steal some ideas hope you guys don't mind! Reading all FAQ. Will post pics and have a link here... but it's still 2 months away.

Very nice compostion on the second set. The WB is not to my taste in some of them but that does not mean they are bad...

I like them.

1. Crop tighter to his back
2. just don't like them centered
3,4,5,6 I like them. 6 has a large hotspot on his forehead. Fill flash would have helped some.
7 Crop tighter to her back.
8. Crop tighter

again these are just my personal opinions as I held papers up to the screen to look at crops etc...doesn't mean they are right.. but I see a huge improvement from set 1 to set 2. keep up the good work.

Thanks for tips and coments!

Why is your gear list someone else's post?

I like them all. I think your processing needs a bit of work all around.
Blown Highlights are best to avoid in portraits.

mikeassk wrote in post #6474135
Why is your gear list someone else's post?

Yeah, I never did figure out how to link it to my page!!! I sould get that fixed!